"For My Sins" - Hip-Hop Effect

DaKidAwMe · 08-27-2010, 08:53 PM

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/defa...songID=9561258

Made This One For My Boy "Nick Nemesis" Album/Mix-Tape Idk... Lol, But he'Za Up-Coming Rapper In West Chester, PA... I think this goes hard... What'cha'll think?

docile · 09-04-2010, 01:08 AM

man...been a long time since i heard any of your shit. you've obviously been working on your sound. shit sounds good but my only criticize would be that the sound you want is nothing new so you're gonna be competing with peeps who have that sound locked. but for what your beats are they're good no doubt. best of luck with it bro.pce

DaKidAwMe · 09-11-2010, 10:40 PM

Word, Thanks man... I know exactllyyy what'chu sayin' bruhhh lol

rape machine · 09-16-2010, 03:35 AM

Not feelin this that much. I don't like the music sounds or really the melody. The drums are aight. The kick seems to dirty though and too loud. Snare is coo. The right emcee could make it sound better though.

killap · 10-25-2010, 01:07 PM

this is alright, i dont really like the choice of instruments, and your levels are off a bit, either then that its all gravy

AMSTERDAMISH · 10-25-2010, 04:47 PM

This was fuckin fire IMO,good job man only it ended very abruptly you should play it out better at the end.

Z-One · 10-25-2010, 05:05 PM

I thought it was fire too, but yeah takin on board what Docile said it could be tough to get heard. I liked it tho.

jordan17black · 11-04-2010, 04:22 AM

shit i could murder this joint cuzo...uh its dope, ur piano could be a little lowder..sick life though. i would have my boyz djin shit like this at the venue
Edit:
this is like a Kanya beat
Edit:
piano in begin could be more clearer it'll sound better

08-27-2010, 08:53 PM	#1
DaKidAwMe DaKidAwMe is doing your little sister Member Join Date: May 2009 Location: Street Swag ENT, Muthafucka! Posts: 410 Props: 60 Propped 72 Times in 58 Posts	"For My Sins" http://www.soundclick.com/bands/defa...songID=9561258 Made This One For My Boy "Nick Nemesis" Album/Mix-Tape Idk... Lol, But he'Za Up-Coming Rapper In West Chester, PA... I think this goes hard... What'cha'll think? __________________ http://www.twitter.com/DaKidAwMe http://www.youtube.com/DaKidAwMe http://www.reverbnation.com/DaKidAwMe http://www.soundclick.com/KutmastaInstrumentalz

09-04-2010, 01:08 AM	#2
docile docile Member Join Date: May 2009 Location: Monster Island Posts: 254 Props: 266 Propped 168 Times in 111 Posts Total Awards: 1	man...been a long time since i heard any of your shit. you've obviously been working on your sound. shit sounds good but my only criticize would be that the sound you want is nothing new so you're gonna be competing with peeps who have that sound locked. but for what your beats are they're good no doubt. best of luck with it bro.pce __________________ ...http://www.soundclick.com/docileterrorist...

09-11-2010, 10:40 PM	#3
DaKidAwMe DaKidAwMe is doing your little sister Member Join Date: May 2009 Location: Street Swag ENT, Muthafucka! Posts: 410 Props: 60 Propped 72 Times in 58 Posts	Word, Thanks man... I know exactllyyy what'chu sayin' bruhhh lol __________________ http://www.twitter.com/DaKidAwMe http://www.youtube.com/DaKidAwMe http://www.reverbnation.com/DaKidAwMe http://www.soundclick.com/KutmastaInstrumentalz

10-25-2010, 01:07 PM	#5
killap killap Finished His Mixtape Scrub Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Winnipeg Posts: 141 Props: 53 Propped 39 Times in 35 Posts	this is alright, i dont really like the choice of instruments, and your levels are off a bit, either then that its all gravy __________________ R.I.P (08/13/07) Christianity has a built-in defense system: anything that questions a belief, no matter how logical the argument is, is the work of Satan by the very fact that it makes you question a belief. It's a very interesting defense mechanism. Jae Havoc ~ In the end, There's just music with soul, And music without. www.facebook.com/Killap ^ Have Facebook? Like my beatz? Add me as a fan

10-25-2010, 04:47 PM	#6
AMSTERDAMISH AMSTERDAMISH LORD ARCADIUM UNDISPUTED Enthusiast Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 1,161 Props: 517 Propped 926 Times in 500 Posts Total Awards: 7	This was fuckin fire IMO,good job man only it ended very abruptly you should play it out better at the end. __________________

09-16-2010, 03:35 AM	#4
rape machine rape machine replying NewJack Join Date: Jun 2010 Posts: 62 Props: 0 Propped 20 Times in 20 Posts	Not feelin this that much. I don't like the music sounds or really the melody. The drums are aight. The kick seems to dirty though and too loud. Snare is coo. The right emcee could make it sound better though.

10-25-2010, 05:05 PM	#7
Z-One Z-One is travellin... Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: Winnersville. Posts: 3,357 Props: 755 Propped 282 Times in 198 Posts Total Awards: 2	I thought it was fire too, but yeah takin on board what Docile said it could be tough to get heard. I liked it tho. __________________ --- DROPPIN' BOMBS.

11-04-2010, 04:22 AM	#8
jordan17black jordan17black Goin Ham with the Trappin Regular Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: DMV Posts: 652 Props: 191 Propped 89 Times in 71 Posts	shit i could murder this joint cuzo...uh its dope, ur piano could be a little lowder..sick life though. i would have my boyz djin shit like this at the venue Edit: this is like a Kanya beat Edit: piano in begin could be more clearer it'll sound better __________________ Once knew a nigga, his name was William,primary concern, was making a million. M.O.B. C.R.E.A.M. F.A.M.E. Fuck text battle, all about free style battle..you can't spit on a ghost..but you can spit in someones face HHE full of these Booshiey Niggas Last edited by jordan17black; 11-04-2010 at 04:22 AM. Reason: Doublepost

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